Random Story of doom and despair
So, tell meh what ya think of pX!, and of that Random Story Post. Well, it's past 10:00, so I think I'll work on the Pickle a bit more then go to bed. Goodbye!
"Wow." said Fang, looking around at Megaville dump. "What a dump. If anything lived here, they would have to be able to cope with junk and trash. Hey, Crackers, you should move here." Crackers scowled at the grinning vampire. "Enough talking." said Dexter. "Let's split up so we can search faster." "But we already split up." I pointed out. Me, Fang, Dexter, and Crackers went to the dump, while Puddles, Creeper, and Tomato looked around the rest of the city. "Me and Crackers will go this way, and You and Fang go this way." Dexter said all leader-like. Fang and I walked over to the piles of junk and looked for a secret entrance. "Man," said Fang, sighing. "Anime would be being so sarcastic right now." "Yeah," I agreed. "Where do you think she is anyway?"
Anime here. I'll be narratin' what happens at where I am. I jerked awake, and looked around. I was in a cage in what looked like Mandark's Lab. I spotted a cage next to mine. Inside sat Blossom. "Hi." She said, looking at me. "Good to see you're awake." "Yeah." I said. "Me too. I had the strangest dream. There was this strange boy......"
Anime here. I'll be narratin' what happens at where I am. I jerked awake, and looked around. I was in a cage in what looked like Mandark's Lab. I spotted a cage next to mine. Inside sat Blossom. "Hi." She said, looking at me. "Good to see you're awake." "Yeah." I said. "Me too. I had the strangest dream. There was this strange boy......"
pX!
Chapter one: First day in Sixth
Chapter one: First day in Sixth
I shut my locker. Even five years at Megaville Elementary couldn't prepare for sixth grade.
"Hi!" said a cheerfull voice to my right. I sighed.
"Hi Fang." I said. "Some first day, huh?" Before he could reply, I heard another cheerful voice. This one was even more cheerful.
"He-ay!" Said Lotus. Lotus was my other friend. She seemed to always be happy. All the time. And when by some way she isn't happy, she makes sarcastic comments and slaps whoever annoys here. All in all, a good friend. "How ya doing? Doin' good? Really good? I hope so. I like it when your good. It makes me happy." She opened her locker and took out some books. "Can you guys hang out today? Step-mom says that I'll be able to right after I do my piano."
"Um.. Yeah, I think I can." I said, thinking over my schedule.
"Well, little engine that could, we'd better get to class. The bell just rung, and soon detention slips will be flying out like rockets." We hurried off to class.
"Hi!" said a cheerfull voice to my right. I sighed.
"Hi Fang." I said. "Some first day, huh?" Before he could reply, I heard another cheerful voice. This one was even more cheerful.
"He-ay!" Said Lotus. Lotus was my other friend. She seemed to always be happy. All the time. And when by some way she isn't happy, she makes sarcastic comments and slaps whoever annoys here. All in all, a good friend. "How ya doing? Doin' good? Really good? I hope so. I like it when your good. It makes me happy." She opened her locker and took out some books. "Can you guys hang out today? Step-mom says that I'll be able to right after I do my piano."
"Um.. Yeah, I think I can." I said, thinking over my schedule.
"Well, little engine that could, we'd better get to class. The bell just rung, and soon detention slips will be flying out like rockets." We hurried off to class.
So, tell meh what ya think of pX!, and of that Random Story Post. Well, it's past 10:00, so I think I'll work on the Pickle a bit more then go to bed. Goodbye!
5 comments:
you know me so well.:D when im not happy, KNOW ONE IS HAPPY!!!!
im sick today:C
hmm.
Josh I think it is good and your random story is funny (grinning vampire, always creepy ;) ) and I have an idea for a title. you ready?...... any moment now....... here it comes......... ZzZzZzZzZ What oh yeah any second.......
When All Goes Wrong
Do ya like it? And you don't sigh when I say hi because usually you just run up to me and say hi and then you ask if we should dance (weird) and when I do say hi you laugh and we start talking. HA!
FIRE-FOX HAS NEW GIR PERSONAS!
What's the setting of your story? If it's in a real-world setting, you might want to reconsider your character's name, as at the moment they're not appropriate for the setting. If you're trying to establish more of a fantasy setting, then you need to make sure the reader knows right off the bat that this isn't supposed to be like the real world.
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