Thursday, April 29, 2010
RANDOM QUESTIONS! GET READY!
If....... Gir came and ate a taco and spit it out all over you're face and then the French declared war on America and then you had taco throw up on you and then Obama made you join the army and you got shot in the arm but then it was gone and then Gir came again and then he ate the Prime Minister but the French won anyway and you got locked in the dungeon with a hobo, what would you do?
Friday, April 23, 2010
Week + End = PIE!
*Sigh* Nobody post on the weekend. But I am. So there. Lololololololololol!!!! Now, a few things of notice.
- I got to question 61 on the impossible quiz!
- I just lost the game
- Invader Zim is on DvD!
- Ben's Christmas story isn't finished yet. (If you haven't read it, you have a life. Loser.)
- I LUV MUNY N00bs!
Wednesday, April 21, 2010
Da Plan
YAYS! Two days ago, IIVU had this awesomely awesome amazing idea! I call it:.... DA PLAN! Start the secret agent music, people. *Secret Agents Music plays* Now, First, we make an account on You tube. Then, we film these episode thingummies, based on Px! Then, put the episode thingummies onto You tube. Then, we make a blog where the authors are the ACTUAL PEOPLE FROM pX! Sounds good, huh? Well, I'm gonna go play World of Warcraft. Goodbye! Goodbye goodbye!
Wednesday, April 14, 2010
S'm Storys
Hi! Sorry I haven't been posting for a while. I'll try to post daily or every other day now. Anyway, back to the subject of Stories. I've gotten a few suggestions of title's for the new Story from my friends. 1. Life of a tween hybird.(Laaaaaame) suggestion from Jeremy. 2. IIVU thought of pX! as the title. I thought it was pretty good. 3. Ben says I should decide a name later, after most of the story is finished. Anyway, I'm gonna use IIVU's title and use Ben's advice. I'll use IIVU's title for now, and might think of a better one later on. Anyway, I present to you a bit more of the original Random Story, and the beginning of the new story. (Note: In the new story, Lotus is Anime. This will make much more sense later in the story.)
Random Story of doom and despair
So, tell meh what ya think of pX!, and of that Random Story Post. Well, it's past 10:00, so I think I'll work on the Pickle a bit more then go to bed. Goodbye!
"Wow." said Fang, looking around at Megaville dump. "What a dump. If anything lived here, they would have to be able to cope with junk and trash. Hey, Crackers, you should move here." Crackers scowled at the grinning vampire. "Enough talking." said Dexter. "Let's split up so we can search faster." "But we already split up." I pointed out. Me, Fang, Dexter, and Crackers went to the dump, while Puddles, Creeper, and Tomato looked around the rest of the city. "Me and Crackers will go this way, and You and Fang go this way." Dexter said all leader-like. Fang and I walked over to the piles of junk and looked for a secret entrance. "Man," said Fang, sighing. "Anime would be being so sarcastic right now." "Yeah," I agreed. "Where do you think she is anyway?"
Anime here. I'll be narratin' what happens at where I am. I jerked awake, and looked around. I was in a cage in what looked like Mandark's Lab. I spotted a cage next to mine. Inside sat Blossom. "Hi." She said, looking at me. "Good to see you're awake." "Yeah." I said. "Me too. I had the strangest dream. There was this strange boy......"
Anime here. I'll be narratin' what happens at where I am. I jerked awake, and looked around. I was in a cage in what looked like Mandark's Lab. I spotted a cage next to mine. Inside sat Blossom. "Hi." She said, looking at me. "Good to see you're awake." "Yeah." I said. "Me too. I had the strangest dream. There was this strange boy......"
pX!
Chapter one: First day in Sixth
Chapter one: First day in Sixth
I shut my locker. Even five years at Megaville Elementary couldn't prepare for sixth grade.
"Hi!" said a cheerfull voice to my right. I sighed.
"Hi Fang." I said. "Some first day, huh?" Before he could reply, I heard another cheerful voice. This one was even more cheerful.
"He-ay!" Said Lotus. Lotus was my other friend. She seemed to always be happy. All the time. And when by some way she isn't happy, she makes sarcastic comments and slaps whoever annoys here. All in all, a good friend. "How ya doing? Doin' good? Really good? I hope so. I like it when your good. It makes me happy." She opened her locker and took out some books. "Can you guys hang out today? Step-mom says that I'll be able to right after I do my piano."
"Um.. Yeah, I think I can." I said, thinking over my schedule.
"Well, little engine that could, we'd better get to class. The bell just rung, and soon detention slips will be flying out like rockets." We hurried off to class.
"Hi!" said a cheerfull voice to my right. I sighed.
"Hi Fang." I said. "Some first day, huh?" Before he could reply, I heard another cheerful voice. This one was even more cheerful.
"He-ay!" Said Lotus. Lotus was my other friend. She seemed to always be happy. All the time. And when by some way she isn't happy, she makes sarcastic comments and slaps whoever annoys here. All in all, a good friend. "How ya doing? Doin' good? Really good? I hope so. I like it when your good. It makes me happy." She opened her locker and took out some books. "Can you guys hang out today? Step-mom says that I'll be able to right after I do my piano."
"Um.. Yeah, I think I can." I said, thinking over my schedule.
"Well, little engine that could, we'd better get to class. The bell just rung, and soon detention slips will be flying out like rockets." We hurried off to class.
So, tell meh what ya think of pX!, and of that Random Story Post. Well, it's past 10:00, so I think I'll work on the Pickle a bit more then go to bed. Goodbye!
Monday, April 12, 2010
NAMES!
'Ello. Sorry I havn't posted for so long. Didn't have the time 'cause BEN LETTIN' ME MAKE MY OWN GAME! I've been so excited. Anyway, Ben says the Random Story needs a few more things. Here is his exact words:
I think you should start revising your story, now that you've laid down plenty of it. Here are some tips for your revision:
1. Start a new paragraph when a new character starts talking. It keeps dialogue clear. It's also an official Rule of English, so you have to do it anyway.
2. Introduce your characters one at a time, and give the reader time to get to know them before throwing even more characters at them.
3. Try to avoid being overly silly.
4. Think of a real title, and make the story a little less random.5. Every sentence should do one of two things: advance the story or show character.
6. Make sure your characters ALL have distinct personalities; even if you have a great lead cast, a bunch of nobodies sitting in the back can muck up the story.
7. Try to always clearly establish when you change settings, including the time or the location.
8. Always read back through what you've written, and fix mistakes and inconsistencies.
9. Don't worry about the length of your story; quality over quantity.
10. Have fun. If you're not having fun writing it, no one will have fun reading it either.
11. Always know what's going to happen. Follow an outline so you never end up having to cast around for something to happen next. Make sure you have a clear beginning, middle, and ending in mind.
Start a new revision with those tips in mind. Post sections as you complete them, and I might actually read it this time.
Well, whaddya think'a that? The thing I'm gonna focus on the Name first. But, my brain is blank. Give me some ideas on the comments. Also, I think I'm gonna cut the nicknames. Some of then will stay, like maybe Fang, and Anime.(Anime might come IIVU) Anyway, tell meh what'cha think.
I think you should start revising your story, now that you've laid down plenty of it. Here are some tips for your revision:
1. Start a new paragraph when a new character starts talking. It keeps dialogue clear. It's also an official Rule of English, so you have to do it anyway.
2. Introduce your characters one at a time, and give the reader time to get to know them before throwing even more characters at them.
3. Try to avoid being overly silly.
4. Think of a real title, and make the story a little less random.5. Every sentence should do one of two things: advance the story or show character.
6. Make sure your characters ALL have distinct personalities; even if you have a great lead cast, a bunch of nobodies sitting in the back can muck up the story.
7. Try to always clearly establish when you change settings, including the time or the location.
8. Always read back through what you've written, and fix mistakes and inconsistencies.
9. Don't worry about the length of your story; quality over quantity.
10. Have fun. If you're not having fun writing it, no one will have fun reading it either.
11. Always know what's going to happen. Follow an outline so you never end up having to cast around for something to happen next. Make sure you have a clear beginning, middle, and ending in mind.
Start a new revision with those tips in mind. Post sections as you complete them, and I might actually read it this time.
Well, whaddya think'a that? The thing I'm gonna focus on the Name first. But, my brain is blank. Give me some ideas on the comments. Also, I think I'm gonna cut the nicknames. Some of then will stay, like maybe Fang, and Anime.(Anime might come IIVU) Anyway, tell meh what'cha think.
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